Hidden Life by bravefire43 and kouen.ninja (phonics story books .TXT) 📕

My friend, kouen.ninja, and I, are working together on a new story, with the working title of "Hidden Life." It's set in the 31st century, and it's about about a couple of girls, twins in fact: an abused slave named Lily Whitlow, and a troublemaking orphan named Jasmine Firetongue. In "Hidden Life," they learn about their kinship, their real parents, and a scary secret about themselves: they aren't completely human.
Kouen.ninja and I would appreciate your positive criticism and advice. I will try to post a new chapter every week or so, and if you would like to be notified of when I post more, just comment and ask me to send you a message next time I add more.
Looking forward to your feedback =D
~Bravey and Ninja